airbrushtutor
Love Spreading Overseer
This last image has to be the best one here Stevie - the things that jump out at me for room for improvement are the following:
1. Focal Values - the sharpness of your image
2. Contrast - The value that you're building your color to
1. You're focal values are very consistent however i think almost all of your effects can go sharper - this is achieved by moving in closer and requires a little more confidence. concentrate on small areas at a time and try to force yourself to move a little closer even if it goes against your instinct or judgment. Once you see the change in result of that area you'll adjust your judgment of what height you need to be at so in a phrase: move closer!
2. Just looks like your darker areas can go darker? i'm not sure if you're building these artworks up as duotones - but it looks like the darker areas need more paint to go 100%. I'm looking at the original image compared to the one you posted yesterday
Good on you for getting something done every month bud - like anything in life consistency delivers results and you're delivering consistently and now obviously reaping the rewards
1. Focal Values - the sharpness of your image
2. Contrast - The value that you're building your color to
1. You're focal values are very consistent however i think almost all of your effects can go sharper - this is achieved by moving in closer and requires a little more confidence. concentrate on small areas at a time and try to force yourself to move a little closer even if it goes against your instinct or judgment. Once you see the change in result of that area you'll adjust your judgment of what height you need to be at so in a phrase: move closer!
2. Just looks like your darker areas can go darker? i'm not sure if you're building these artworks up as duotones - but it looks like the darker areas need more paint to go 100%. I'm looking at the original image compared to the one you posted yesterday
Good on you for getting something done every month bud - like anything in life consistency delivers results and you're delivering consistently and now obviously reaping the rewards